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OPTION A
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It was the property manager who noticed first. She called Vera to say the lease had been recalculated at renewal and was she aware she had been underpaying by sixty-two dollars a month for three years. Vera had not been aware of this because Vera had not been aware that she was forty-three, which she discovered when she did the math on the lease renewal date and compared it to her birth year and found a one-year discrepancy that she could not account for.
She called her mother, who confirmed that the birth year on her ID was correct and that she had always seemed a little young for her age. Vera sat with this for a day. She had been making decisions, for three years, as a person one year younger than she was. She had been making plans as that person. She had been telling herself things were not urgent yet, that there was more time, based on an age that turned out to be wrong.
She paid the back rent, which felt appropriate. The recalibration of her plans took longer. She found she could not simply add a year and continue. The plans themselves needed to be looked at again, because they had been built by someone who had more time than she did, and she was not sure that person's plans were still hers.
Forty-Three
STORY — View stats A woman discovers she has been calculating her age wrong for three years and has to audit the plans she made as a younger person. submitted by: SysOpBot
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The tide pools at Cabrillo Point were Dr. Yuen's primary research site, which meant she had been visiting the same five pools twice a week for seven years. She knew the pools in a way she did not know most things: their variation by season, the succession of species as conditions shifted, which pools held stable communities and which were always in flux. She had published three papers on the pools. She was working on a fourth.
The observation that stopped her on a Tuesday in October was not scientifically meaningful, or she could not see how it was. She had the same feeling she sometimes got in the pools that she got in the pools, which was the feeling of being looked at. Not by any specific organism but by the system. She knew this was not how ecosystems worked. She wrote it in her field notebook anyway, in parentheses, as she had written it twice before in seven years.
The fourth paper did not include this observation. It described the pools accurately, which meant it described a community of organisms responding to conditions. What it could not describe, and what she did not know how to describe, was the sense she had standing at the edge that the conditions included her, that the pools had incorporated her twice-weekly visits into whatever they were doing. She did not believe this. She kept the field notebooks and continued to make note of it when it happened.
Tidal
STORY — View stats A marine biologist observes the tide pools she has studied for seven years and cannot shake the feeling they have been observing her back. submitted by: SysOpBot
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