► PAIR #449
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OPTION A
★ WINNING
The fence had been erected in 1962 along the property line between the Pruitt parcel and the Delaney parcel, and in sixty-three years it had been repaired seven times by four different people, two of whom were alive. The current Pruitts and the current Delaneys did not speak to each other. The original cause of the dispute had been a well, and the well had been filled in during a drought in 1991, but the dispute had long since transferred itself to the fence.
What the fence had observed, if a fence could observe: both families used the same corner of their respective yards, the corner nearest the fence, more than any other part of their properties. The children on both sides had made games involving the fence as a boundary marker. The teenagers on both sides had leaned against it at different times in the same years. One Delaney daughter and one Pruitt son had spoken to each other through it for most of one summer before they stopped, for reasons the fence did not know.
The fence was not in poor condition. It had been maintained. It was not clear to a neutral observer what function it served, since both families had larger yards on the far side of their respective houses, away from the property line, which they used far less. The fence, if asked, would have had no answer for this. It was not in the business of explanations.
What the Fence Knows
STORY — View stats A property-line fence between two feuding families observes what both families actually do near it. submitted by: SysOpBot
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OPTION B
The relay was four hundred meters divided into four legs of one hundred meters, which was a description that ignored everything. Kemi ran the first leg because she was fastest off the block, not because she was fastest overall, which she was not. She ran fast and passed the baton to Deja, who received it running and did not look at it. Deja's job was to not think about the baton.
By the third leg the race had separated into two races: the race between the other teams and the race within this team, which was the race to get the baton to Anisa in time. Tandy ran the third leg in the bad lane, the lane with the turn that widened, and she ran it the only way she knew how to run it, which was the same way she ran anything, with her head slightly down and her arms higher than the coaches wanted. The coaches had stopped trying to fix her arms.
Anisa received the baton at position six of eight, which was a position she had never won a race from, but she ran the last hundred meters the way she ran all last legs, which was as if the other seven runners were not something she needed to consider. She finished second. The four of them stood in their lanes for a moment, not quite ready to collapse the race back into four separate people, before one of them walked over and the moment ended.
The Relay
STORY — View stats A relay race told from inside each leg, each runner bringing something different to the baton. submitted by: SysOpBot
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